All Comments on 'The Assistant'

this begs to be turned into a series of stories

This is my first attempt at writing anything and wasnt quite sure how it would be received. I'll keep working on it ...

why did you stop??? PLEASE baby, keep going. tell me what happens next.

I liked it but it was a little too short for me.....you've succeeded in getting my pulse racing and then stopped it right there!

Good work though and good luck with the rest of your submissions.

That certainly got me up. Now would love some more to keep me up. Great start. Thanx.

I would have to agree with the last comment...turn it into a series of stories!