by Thomas_Lodge
As I said before, I think you are a truly gifted writer. I don't just read you stories, I am transported into them. This story has been a very dark ride for me, getting darker with every chapter. I don't know what your plans for Peter are, but my hope is that he will actively join the resistance movement. In the end it would great to see his father strapped to the dining table, beaten, whipped, and the collar shocking him until he pisses himself. Even if you end up killing Peter off, I hope you will allow him to go down fighting. Thanks again for the great stories.
I wish that at the end Peter gives a speech and then commits suicide and the Father and brother die in remorse of what they have done to him
I'm hoping that martin loses and has to wear the uniform. The laws should also change to make all of them naked at all times.
Best one yett ! Can’t wIt keep it up . I want him to be used to total submission.