All Comments on 'The Aunts Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Try to make the chapters longer this is a very good story

Keep the story coming, it's great so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
She slowly pulled her shorts down to revile the prize.

revile - criticise in an abusive or angrily insulting manner; hatefully; to despise

reveal - to expose; to show; to open to view

Not attacking, just that a spellchecker isn't everything, when a word used is almost the opposite of what should have been used, it causes the reader to pause, to work it out, only a couple of seconds, but the delay, breaks the flow

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep them coming

He needs to fuck all the aunts.. and his mom.... and they need to find out about each other

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I'm really loving this series. Five stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
PLEASE - Spellcheck!

"I held her and watcher her for a while..."

WetheNorthWetheNorthalmost 3 years ago
You lost points

for sloppy writing

boredcagedwifeboredcagedwifealmost 3 years ago

I tell myself I’m aunt KK but I’m probably aunt Cathy 😂😭

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

OMG that was 100% HOT thanks for the nut

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

How many times can you use the word fat? You need an editor really badly.

chiefhalchiefhalover 2 years ago

After fucking two women, he should probably shower....just sayin'

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Loved this chapter hot sex with his Aunt KK 5 stars

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I’m rmcgee and I am creating a few series plus standalone stories. I took a break for a while, but I’m back and hope to be posting quite often. I wrote several chapters of the Aunt Cathy and family series and then lost them on my computer. After that I just didn’t have it in ...

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