All Comments on 'The Awakening of Jennifer Pt. 01'

by Ophelia_Coque

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent start to a very promising story. Look forward to reading more...... soon.

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11over 1 year ago

Great fun and a wonderful debut.

IsabellaEmilyIsabellaEmilyover 1 year ago

Great start!

I cannot wait to read more!

Susan2002Susan2002over 1 year ago

Wonderfull start to what I hope is a series! It reminds me of some of the Victorian erotica, like 'Fanny Hill'.

Your first story, too. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, well written, fun premise, erotic, and arousing, keep writing love to see more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it!!! Hope it becomes a series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Congratulations on your first story! I hope that young Jennifer gets to know Henry more intimately?

PleaseLetMeImPleaseLetMeImover 1 year ago

Brilliant writing.

Love the whole set up and scenes.

Can’t wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it! We often get descriptions of male orgasm, but seldom the female point of view.

Very erotic!

Cal59Cal59over 1 year ago

Nice start, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A touch of Lady Chatterley in that story - excellent!

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 1 year ago

An incredible maiden effort. You have skills. About to read chapter 2.

GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetroniusover 1 year ago

An excellent first offering, well designed and crafted, and the prelude to an engaging story. I look forward to the future installments.

maddictmaddictover 1 year ago

Lovely 🌹

The first of firsts, seconds do very well to.

roveroneroveroneover 1 year ago

having a wank...seems girls always discover it later than boys, but once they do...!

Henry must be really packing if tip of his helmet 1-2 inches above his navel

Most blonde's muffins I've encountered had very little curl to their pubes...

We know they're gonna hook up...if only she could listen to G+O's 'The Loophole' first-no worries about a cake in the oven then.

stickygirlstickygirlover 1 year ago

Holy hell! This is wonderful and I'm all of a dither. Thank you!

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 1 year ago

Jennifer wants more?

Oh, very well.

What is holding us back?

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I discovered the Literotica site recently, and thought it would be fun to write an erotic story. I have never tried anything like that before, so please go easy on me! Being single at the moment probably has made me a bit more 'frisky' than normal, hence my interest in this s...

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