All Comments on 'The Bachelorette Ch. 02'

cant wait for more, great chapter, easy to read and cant wait to see what happens next...bring on the BBQ!

I'm bored to tears. And by the way, "rouges" is actually "rogues".

This was a great introduction. I enjoyed reading it. I hope Leon is Sam's mate. Can't wait for the BBQ to see what happens. Please don't make us wait too long.

Please continue the story i love it.....

More more!!! I need more and I cant wait to read the next chapter but can u make a little more longer then just 2 pages cuz this s a good story and i can wait for it to next chapter to see what is happening.. Your story is different and yet the same of some i have read by other but yours is much better cuz ur story line make sense not just sex but a story that involves find love understanding helping one and another showing what a pack does for any they need help and etc. i cant wait to read the next chapter mmore more

This is a good story but it would be better for the attention of an editor. For example rogue is a scoundrel in the human world or a vicious individual acting outwith normal or desirable controls, you however had a group of men running around wearing fur and an ancient form of blusher. Grin now that would complicate your choice of category.

A few other places where you appear to have used spell check not a wise thing for a good writers since it only tells you if the word is correctly spelled not that it is the incorrect word.

Please continue writing this story is shaping up nicely.

Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter.

to weave an interesting story. I like how you are setting up the "rules" that guide a wolf when searching for a mate. It's almost like you can start dating at 16 but must wait until at least 18 although 21 would be preferable to mate. That Sam is Alpha Bitch material is going to be interesting especially when all of the area Alpha's arrive for the party. I look forward to reading more of your story....

Next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love your story and am looking forward to the opsticles that the lady will overcome,C6F3

I am enjoying this story and I will most definitely follow your posts, however you keep saying rouge and I would like to know whether this is a mistake and you mean rogues or french as all your pack sir names have been. Also if you need an editor don't shy to ask me!

Au revoir

Uriziel

A good story and I look forward to the next chapter. However, some editing would help with the flow of the story.

Next chapter please.

So far it's a good story. I'm looking forward to the next instalment, so please continue. One point: It's spelled "rogue" not "rouge".

Ready for the next one!!! You should post on fictionpress.com That way people can get email updates when you update.

i'm loving the story. I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER. PLEASE

Sorry about signing on without my screen name. I forgot what it even is. I have enjoyed the first two chapters and I am thirsty for more. Look forward to your next addition to the story.

I love this story!!! Please keep on writing it! Cant wait for the next part!

What happens next! Please keep writing and finish the story! I enjoyed it and it would be such a pity to leave people hanging.

I'm liking the story but this particular chapter you repeated the age concept twice in detail to the reader. It probably would've been best if u had just said Pierre repeated the same to the entire group and then they react. It's minor but not something I'd like to happen again. I'm excited to see how the mating party goes too :)

Don't leave us hanging! I would love to know what happens next in the story!

Please bring the next chapter soon. Loving the story, want more please. Please don't leave us hanging.

just some feedback FYI ... the word is "rogue" not "rouge".

Hey, love the story. Just curious as to when the next chapter is coming? Please bring out soon.

When you gonna finish it ? The story was great .

Love it! Also I was wondering when the next chapter will come out. Can't wait to read it!!!

Can wait for the next chapter

I love this story so far and can't wait for more. I want to read more and soon please you are a really good writer and I love you stories I've read everything you've written so please continue to do so.

Love Nikki xxx

Hey, was just wandering WHEN will the next chapters be coming? Really enjoying the story so far. PLEASE don't make ur fans wait months on end for each chapter. Hope u put the next chapter or 2 up soon.

Please I want to read more!!!!

i need more update soon please?

please tell me ur adding more i keep coming back to see if ur adding and so far there has been no new chapters

I can understand it been a month or 2 at the most between chapters, but not this long. WHEN are the next few chapters coming? You can't get us hooked then make us wait months between chapters.

Sorry about this.... I submitted the edited version to replace the original and apparently I put the first chapter back up here. It should be fixed soon and chapter three is coming out.

Where is chapter 2? It seems chapter 2. Is chapter 1

To Clarify, I had an editor look through all of my stuff, when I posted up the new edited versions I apparently selected chapter 1 twice, so both chapter 1 and chapter 2 are the same, I found the mistake and submitted the correction and chapter 2 should be back online soon. As for the gap in chapters one to chapter three this will be fixed once chapter two is back up.

Just wanted to say thank you for correcting the mistake, chapter3 and Valerie's story makes a lot more sense now. Really enjoyed chapter2 also.

Thank you

Keep writing but would love you to explore the difficulty some of the women will have with their wolf mates having been forced to turn :-)