All Comments on 'The Bachelorette Ch. 03'

i think we missed something between the raid and this one

Read your chapter. There seems to be a time jump and it is confusing.

From one writer to another, I must say that I understand your need to put out a new story. I Understand that life does get in the way and things change. Allow for that to happen and your true fans will wait for you.

Having said that, the first chapter held promise and the revised chapter really did nothing. In fact to clarify confusion, have the first one removed and repost this entire thing.

YOU NEED AN EDITOR. Point blank. I know you do this for fun. So do I. So understand this comes from the heart and hope this does not anger you but encourage you to do better.

Good luck.

It jumps really quick between chapter two and three like whats goin on didnt she go with the good wolves back to their compound and the place they just took isnt that were the woman were held we need a transition chapter between chp two and three should really just resubmit the whole thing but its a good story with alot of potential just really need an editor or some beta readers

I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Can't wait for the next one, please don't make us wait so long though.

I had an editor look through all of my stuff, when I posted up the new edited versions I apparently selected chapter 1 twice, so both chapter 1 and chapter 2 are the same, I found the mistake and submitted the correction and chapter 2 should be back online soon. As for the gap in chapters one to chapter three this will be fixed once chapter two is back up. I apologize to anyone who did not read the chapter 2 before I tried to fix it, so this chapter makes no sense. Within a few days the error should be corrected.

I am really enjoying your story and your conviction to keep writing. I am excited to read your next installment.

Loved it, can't wait to read more

Sam found her mate. Must be the Other Alpha hehe. Due to the posting mix ups I think there is a little disconnect to the story and maybe a few missing pieces but otherwise good job.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please don't stop your series!

Please hurry with next chapter!!!

I was waiting for a new Werewolf story that is a good read. Job well done!!!

update soon cant wait for the next one.

I feel like things are somehow hanging in the air, hard to get a grip on. Like a theater play that has no prop but a black surrounding, no clue about how places and people are related really. New persons and places are just plopped in without much preample.

These werewolves also seem to have quite bad senses, and it is is weird that the rogues have no guarding around their area.