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by EmeliaBell

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 17 years ago
Well done but incomplete

This is only a fragment of a story, a part of a larger picture. It is very well done with the hints of other elements to this relationship. I just feel there is so much more to tell here. Thank you for sharing

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 17 years ago
Good story

Enjoyable tale of the movement from a vanilla relationship to a power exchange. A teeny bit of stereotyping (subs aren't necessarily meek and dominants don't do it to feel masculine) but it didn't distract from the story.

Fertile ground for sequel that explores the couple's feeling on total power exchange.

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Emelia Bell is an author whose voice, both written and spoken, is uniquely English. She writes intense and steamy stories with strong characters and plots and mind-blowing sex scenes. If your taste runs to the Anglophiliac and you appreciate a plot-driven stroke story then E...