All Comments on 'The Band Ch. 01'

Wouldn't say it was great (is it Joanie or Jeanie?), but good enough for a second chapter. Four stars.

Abrupt ending.

Great story, hope theres more

Skips over the onstage 'accidents' too quickly.

Enjoyable and fun. Listen to the comments, give a little more detail where it would help the reader’s enjoyment, and part 2 will be great. Try to get the anatomy right - you can’t cup a vagina as it’s internal. You mean vulva but as that always sounds clinical, stick to pussy.

Great story. Thank you.

You have a good story lime, great characters, and impending crisis with Andrew.

I know how much effort and how many drafts are required to get it right. I am grateful..

Looking forward to Chapter 2, potentially with a bit more detail about the "oops" moments!

Brill story with enormous possibilities. Look forward to many more escapades. Thank you.