All Comments on 'The Barn'

but IMO it went too far from consensual to abusive. There’s a world of difference between sensual erotic pain and real pain which is how you described the situation. You said that she wanted it to stop but it didn’t, the unprotected sex was vague so no idea if these guys were STD free, no mention of whether or not she’s on birth control (at one point you mentioned breeding- that’s a personal yuk for me) so to me all of that breaks all 3 of the bdsm tenets Safe, Sane and Consensual.

Otherwise it was a really good story. The concept is sound, it’s just some details that caused problems.

Tess

I would have given this story five stars, but the grammatical errors are too distracting.