All Comments on 'The Beach'

I’m still new even though I’ve written a lot...I have time.

You’re developing nicely, I like the way you write

I loved your story very much. I have fantasied about having sex on the beach as well. Your story got me so excited that I could not keep my hands off of my hard dick. I like the way you write and I cannot wait for your next story.

Your are so seductive and sexy!

Irresistible!

Yes, I would have fucked you there, too....and let everyone watch....and jerk off while watching! No wonder you would have kept fucking after Mike was spent!

I prefer ‘shorter’ stories, this one was about public sex, something I enjoy. Great story!

Your stories are written so erotically; they provide some hot detail; they really encapsulate what an erotic story is all about...adventure with sensual, hot, passionate, love making or fucking.....turns me on everytime!