All Comments on 'The Beach Cottage Ch. 05'

it's payback time !.... or so I hope... I hope kelly gets here just desserts.

I really have loved thes chapters. they really could happen in real live. That is why I feel this story will not be recieved by everyone. It is well written and I like the way the Hubby is not a wimp. I hope you can work it where Kelli and hubby can fix their marriage after Kelli pays for her cheating and Ray and Lisa pay for making porn.

I hope you can weave it around where hubby nails his wife

for cheating. For her lies. Sex was consenual when he did

it with Lisa, but Kelly has been telling lies for quite awhile

and deserves what she gets. You implied she had been having

sex with another husband and I don't remember her hubby being

told about it.

Critical point in stories and life is trust. If she lied once

she will do it again. Any man or woman who tolerates it either has a hidden agenda or gets what they deserve. As ole

Bill W. said, keep on doing what ya been doin', ya keep on

gettin' whatcha been gettin'" -- rough paraphrase, but you

should get my point.

Can't wait for the confrontation between hubby and Kelly +

I hope hubby calls the cops for the porn stuff (after he

makes a copy of each, then hides those of him and his wife)

You have a real knack for getting my emotions rolling, only

a few authors can do this. Thanks so much for your time

and effort.

fuck them all take over their business black mail all the other women divorce that slut of a wife he has make them pay all of them ray and l9isa especially and most of all that slut wife i think the first thing i would do is burn down the cottage call me a pencil dick lol he would fuck with his fingers when i was through with him and lisa lol id fuck her with a horse cock so she could see what filled up truly was she would even be able to feel a mans cock at all

revenge is ever so sweet

So she wasn't the angelical faithful wife? I liked how it all turned out in this chapter. I really wonder what Tracy will do?

PLEASE TRACY! DON'T LET US DOWN!!

HUSBAND REVENGE BY HEADHUNTER TALE IS THE BEST AT PAYING WIFE BACK.

Well, he can kiss that wife goodbye. She'll be fucking Ray more times than Tracey even sees her.

I was hoping she wasn't a slut but--too bad.

What a jolt to find she's fucking around elsewhere, too

Not we wind up with group sex, cumsucking husbands or my favorite for this couple-- DIVORCE.

But I hope he can burn Ray and Lisa before it's over for him. Coalition of husbands should come up with a finacial and social destruction of the two!!!

The Balls and hemungus cock are in your court - what will you do with the loving husband - you could ruin the story and wuss him out - naah - if you do you lose us and it's another author down the drain and another candidate for "NON-Erotic Sick WUSSIE Author of the Year". (or "How to Ruin a Great Story") Your history says you will screw it up.

Or do it right to life's realities / marital contract and have some Loving Wife consequence.

You are talented and we think intelligent, so lets see where this goes - where do you want us - pissed off or looking for more from you??? Regards

I can't wait for the next chapter. Tracey's got to get word to Jolene's husband, find out about Kelley and Mary beth's husband and then give the appropriate retributions.

Divorce is obviously necessary but maybe some kneecaps need to go too.

now is the time to blackmail them ... divorce the cunt .. after you get say about a half million .... and i think he needs to laso fuck all the women before he turns them in or gets his money... after he gets his money ... well it is the second marriage for both... maybe his third when he has enough money to retire and move away will let him either enjoy many or find a vewry nice 3rd...dont forget the prenupitals... dont wan6 number 3 taking any do you