All Comments on 'The Beach House Pt. 01'

by MindiM

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lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 month ago

Sometimes that is what is needed to kickstart the husband's and wife's love life. I approve

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

It was a quick read but I think it would have benefitted a bit more from some more angst or inner dialog. I mean she really didn't have any issue in cheating and it was like the second meeting out in public. Some more struggle on her part and maybe some guilt would have made it a better read for me. I don't care for the topic but as a story you had her quickly cheat and then "frolic".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Once a cheater, always... Let's have a next chapter in her adventures. She has all summer M-W while hubby is away and the contractors are there...

Nice start.

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I'm a young professional woman. Trim and dark haired. Happily married to my college boyfriend for three years. I'm quite straightforward, if a bit confused about my sexual desires. I like to write as way of working it out.