All Comments on 'The Beginning of Stopping Time Ch. 04'

nice job. Can't wait for the next chapter

Is there another chapter happening?

It was a turn-off to have the MC do sexual stuff with guys, ruined the fantasy.

This is a good plot but bad writing. You can tell it's been written by a middleschooler who's had no sexual experience apart from the erotic stories he's read

I may not be the best writer, but I don’t appreciate you assuming who I am as a person. You do not have to read it if you don’t like it.

Don't listen to him very great work.

MC getting guys aroused? Um, no. Just no.

ANd really, having this kind of power over women, there's no way I'd share. ANy woman. ever.

fucking great writing! can you also add details on how you are 'arousing' the guys. it would be much appriecated!