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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Delightful beginning

Joe and Katie are off to a good start. Joe seems like such a real gentleman, and an attractive man to boot! When she has him alone, maybe several dates down the line, and she has the opportunity to see him stripped of his shirt (we'll start with that), maybe she can see (and feel) a muscular chest graced with a bit of manly chest hair?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Canadian eh

It was so nice to read a hot story taking place in Canada. But must say we Canadians do have an accent. But only Canadians that have been here all there life that normally know. But I loved the story will look forward to follow ups.

DunkirkDunkirkover 3 years ago

How about another chapter or 2

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