All Comments on 'The Bench'

Quite a bit of scene setting and creating an image in one's mind. The tree with the bench in the middle of fields comes over as a real place. It is indeed pleasant on a walk to stop at a bench under a tree in the middle of fields and have a wank. I've done that on long walks!

I think it would have worked better had it just been a separate masturbation story albeit with a further meeting and developing activity with Jennie. I did like her, '"Well, why don't you come and wank over me, instead of whatever you were watching on your phone.' She did ask him to come on her boobs but the story did not have that happen.

Your recurrent charatcter 'Pete' (I wonder who he is) does seem to meet a lot of ladies on his walks.