All Comments on 'The Benefits Man'

I guess you take the good with the bad. This was bad, bobbie.

Was she mine Benny would be looking for his teeth & the rest of them could just keep Ellen cause she sure would not be coming home with me.

The story is good, just not complete....a real cliff hanger i hope you or some one else would finish it.

Thank you

if so I didnt see one.

Stupid idea, not much of a plot and zero ending.

After reading the first line, I know what you are going to write in the last line. You are such a poor writer. Same plot over and over again, with change of name for husband and wife. You have so low IQ.

Try to write something new, so that I can not predict the ending.

What you are doing is just changing the names and few other things in the format which you have saved in your computer. Which is very common in this era of IT.

undecided, but certainly not one of your best JPB. Hence 50. As an offset to more, it would pass. Seems indeed the story could use another chapter

We could use another chapter on this one.

Wait till you see his other new story from a certain website. I am guessing he will post it here soon. It's even worse than this one.

Love the idiots that complain about bob. Nobody else on here is writing for shit and you are complaining about someone that actually can put a story together? Give it a rest or else we are stuck with gaywads that are just writing about suck fantasies for themselves.

Course, then again, if you are complaining then maybe you like the gay fantasies....

You complain about people not liking Bob's stories, to bad. If you like them talk to them not to readers that dont care for your low rated opinions. This story is about as low in life as one couple can go. The husband must have an IQ of about 40 and also be as dense and as stupid as he can be. The wife is a whore and puts out for her companies workers whenever and whereever she can. By now she would have acquired a large variety of diseases in real life but then in Bob's world nothing every happens to the queen slut and the husband is left with the creamed panties and a family falling apart. How many women ruined your life Bob? So many you want to get back a men for what your women did to you?

This should have been your invitational this year. If it was, I would have rated it 100. Booklinz

Great little story and very amusing! Can you really believe that nobody else thought it was funny. Does 'annonymous in wherever' actually mean over serious with no sense of humour? Bet your life it means incapable of writing a story themselves. (with aplogies to some of you of course)

There will be no sequel, just as there is no ending.

JPB cannot write an ending, and surely will not write a sequel.

I didn't find this funny and when I write stories they are about people and things I like, there was nothing and no one in this I liked. Sluts and dumb ass hubbies don't turn me on. Bob is a twisted old man, some I like, some I don't, he doesn't care either way.

It was not enjoyable because the poor guy had his world come apart. Perhaps he should have gotten suspicious when there were too many guys dancing with her. But like many man he was lazy and sat there drinking instead of holding his territory. But then again, I would prefer to have my suspicions confirmed, because you do not want to run off half

cocked and it was certainly better to get rid of the whore... But there is always the threat of the protagonist preferring to sit in the closet and ... Those stories of JPB realllly burn me... This one was interesting and with a disagreeable flavor..

I think you write well but when you make husband total brain dead idiot it's hard to enjoy the story.

the Ct. Yankee

and then id break his fucking nose and tell him sorry but now you can have the sorry bitch to take home with you...i heard what some of tjhe other guys said in the bathroom and if my dear wife didnt get fucked i want her to prove it right now by showing us all her cunt....if its not wet and covered in cum then ill take back your broken nose....but if it is well just take it out of the 500000 thousand im sueing this company for .....and you can pay for the divorce also....oh and wonder what all your wives will say when they finmd out all the men here have been fucking the compant slut...yeah ill agree a skilled writer yes but one thatknows his subjects no ....jpb is really pretty stupid when it comes to knowing what his audience wants to read

JPB has the sophistication to know when to quit telling a story and leave it to the readers to do what they will with it in their own mind. Unfortunately, he attracts many readers without the same sophistication. Another fun read from JPB. Always makes logging in worthwhile.

I don't get why in hell wanted his wife have him go to the party? just curious. this was about the dumbest idea or did she think looking makes it easier for him then telling him?

I like your story but really would have liked more details about the wife and her affairs. A follow up story would be great. I want to see if the husband can get anymore stupidand if she can get anymore sluttier.

In every flavor its always the same - a helpless cuck just doesn't get it - or wants to watch.<P>

bobie's needle just gets stuck on self sought male humiliation cuz nothing else can get him up.<P>

Wasted talent in his long deep addiktion. <P>

How sad little weakling.

....the guys only want to dance with the homely cum dump.This is a decent start to a story so...(but harry can't find a plot?)-pistolpackinpete

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Same old assholes with same old complaints.

...finish that damn thing!!!

More details about the husbandhe´s so clueless...) and the wife.

This is HighIQ110 and yes from India.

I am a Post Graduate at Mathematics and MBA. An executive in corporate sector.

The story I have written, New Years Eve Party, is not my story. It has written by JPB in the name “The Benefits Man”.

I have just changed the names and reposted it. I have no intention to steal his or anyone’s story.

And I have no intention to write a single story here or any other website.

Then why I have done this? Because I want to show the world two things.

1. This is just what JPB is doing. He has saved a format in his computer and posting a new story changing the names and few things with the same plot.

2. Everyone is not block-headed fool like him.

I got 14 very interesting comments and total 125 nos…lol.

One of them told me that it is better than JPB.

I am really sorry for that JPB.

Who gets the last laugh ???

I wished the hell you would give your male charicters some balls and intelegence. I am sick to death of these demasculating type wives who believe they are invinsable in their cheating!!!!

Wish you'd stop this shit.

Yes, I know - you write for your own fun but - some of us enjoy your humor but not the hanging parts.

Thanks...enjoyed it anyway!

You write about a man that is supposed to be smart, but then portray him as being so stupid that it is a wonder that he can feed himself. In the next story his wife will give birth to a half black baby and convince the hubby that it must have come from his genes, even though she has been witholding sex and he has a vasectomy.

1 star rating because its the lowest that is allowed. An incomplete story no matter how well it is written, simply cannot deserve more. Not just that, but i strongly believe an incomplete story should not be allowed on the site. JPB, Brittease are authors who love writing such stories. It's a trend that should not be encouraged.

And this story fits securely into that "unfinished" category.

I really like your writing when you finiush the story, but this one just SUCKS because you didn't!

Well done

It just proved his wife is a slut. Get pictures of her fucking around. Fix finances so there is nothing left for her to take. Send to all wives and girlfriends. Put on internet. Send email to everyone she knows. Send pictures to every person he can find at her work. Put pictures in every car in parkinglot.

Basically make everyone she know aware the slut she is. Now throw her out and sue the company. Destroy everything benny has. Burn his car, house, cabin, etc. Pay or do it yourself by beating him with a bat and destoying his balls.

write more and make it believable, asshole's comment is not real or believable. Plus your ass will be in jail and Bubba will make you his botch. Just like he did to dear annony!!

As clueless as they come.

... Can he?

Seriously, if your woman has a pussy, there's probably a man out that will be more than willing to fuck her. Doesn't matter how plain a woman looks, as long as her pussy is tight and she puts out.

There's no real way to rationalize what happened here - you seriously have to be a total retard to dismiss what just happen here, especially given the 'Benny' revelation. And, if he's really look for concrete proof, it wouldn't be a bad idea to have a talk to the three single ladies that didn't get to dance - something about their attitude towards Ellen makes me think that one of them wouldn't mind at all spilling some tea.

Anyway... yet another dumb Bob avatar who ultimately is getting what he deserves.

Take her home. Before he starts the car, lean over, kiss his wife, stick his hand under her dress and into her panties (if she's wearing any). The taste of her mouth, the smell of her breathe and the feel of her cunt will tell him everything her needs to know. Don't want to be that obvious right in the car? Go home and when she undresses, make sure he's right there to look at her body. Check out her panties. Look at her cunt. Again. Pretty easy to know what happened. And then the question becomes, not whether or not she did it, but whether or not he's going to divorce her and leave or if he's going to sue the Company AND divorce her, then leave. Either way the Company and the men involved deserve some pain. This needs another chapter. Bad Bob, BAD!

No stars can't imagine anyone that stupid

Kept reading because I just knew her to was going to catch on

Can anyone actually be that? Can't even think of term

do you finish this story or is it just going to be stupid

Bob lays another unfinished egg on us. This one was rotten.

What on earth was all this crap about?.

what a stupid story

But the next morning while she was waking up with a hangover I confronted her again and this time she admitted it in her half awake state.

When she finally came fully awake I was packing.

She asked me where I was going? I replied "As far from you, you slut, as I can." and I left the house after warning her she had better inform the guys she works with to watch out.

Over the next 12 weeks every person who worked for the company (including the 65 year old Managing Director) was beaten half to death. Their testicles were destroyed as were several other parts of their bodies.

The Medical Insurance Company, upon receiving several hundred thousands of dollars in claims from my wife's company, jacked the premium up by 200%.

Eventually the men at the company worked out who was responsible for the beatings but seeing as there was no proof the accusations went nowhere.

Benny (who had received a particularly viscous beating) eventually let my wife know who was believed to be responsible for the beatings.

She did not believe him until she got home and asked me.did she find out I only had two more to go (one being the 65 year old CEO) . She was actually wondering why I was "WORKING" late when I had never done it before.

It then clicked with her why I had stopped having sex with her for the last 12 weeks.

When she started to say she was sorry I told her to fuck off.

After I had finished with the last two I had her served with divorce papers using irreconcilable differences but with the threat that the true cause would be released to her family and the wives of her work colleagues.

Sure the confessions were given under duress but would that really matter when the spouse heard the confession. The divorce attorney's love my ex-wife as she was brought up as a corespondent in many divorces in our town.

When the CEO's Wife found out that he was one of the people fucking my wife she took everything from him AND I DO MEAN EVERYTHING. Her father had started the company and had appointed him CEO when her father retired. Upon finding out what a low life sleaze bag his son in law was he fired him. He was last seen picking up cans on the highway due to an iron clad Pre-Nuptial agreement.

My ex-wife well she was fired (after the divorce so no Alimony) and I last saw her fighting with her ex-CEO for an empty can.

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Pick one name and stick to it - either it is iameasel or its dumb! I kind of think your the latter. Enjoyed the story Bob. Five stars!

somewhere east of Omaha

Don't be a fuck up

Could have been much better than it was. Waste of a good setup.

Good start but where's the rest of the story?

Unfinished story me thinks

Pathetic stupid ending

Sometime the writer should write a story on why he feels compelled to write and not finish stories. Some of his works are the classic definition of" Coitus Interuptus".