All Comments on 'The Best Jog of My Life'

Another success! Amy x

Sweet and hot

I like the plot honestly. I can quickly imagine myself in the same scenario being a fun of jogging myself.

However, I felt the story was way too fast than it could be. Maybe describing it more in details perhaps would add more erotic effect into it. And to make sure to stay on first person POV for the rest of the story when you started it out on first person, or stay in third person POV when you started it in third.

Though the forceful/non consent theme wasn’t highlighted as much as the subject really gave in to the act, overall m, I think the context is erotic and good. Kudos

Thank you all (esp CucumberLemonade) for the feedback!! Can't wait to keep writing and improving.