All Comments on 'The Best Laid Plans'

Sam and Nat sound like a real good time!

Where is some character development? Who are these people? This is not a story?

Page 3, "not quite there yet," and then they decide to drive home, . . . , pissed??? Really!

Ah, I love it when a plan comes to fruition like this... This was a sweet sharing experience between friends, with an endearing playmate in Nat.

Excellent closer. You painted the ending gloriously! I could see the sex that each couple were experiencing. Great writing skills!

This was a really hot story. Bravo. I wish I was half the writer that you are, haha. The story was well developed and all four characters were relatable. I do wish there was a little more interaction between the two pairings during intercourse, though. A part two would be awesome. Keep up the great work!

Loved this story. A second part would be great. So many options from here.