All Comments on 'The Big Man’s Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a dilemma! Was Mark cheating on his wife causing her to divorce him? Or vice versa? She cheated and divorced Mark for her lover? Maybe just irreconcilable differences was the reason. But for sure Hayley cheated on Danny with Mark! How to respond to a story like this? With 5☆ of course for the just desserts Mark received by his learning a lesson for his messing with the wife of a jealous man (tip of the hat to James Groce). Mark will learn not to get into a gunfight with only a karate kick in his pocket! - TANSTAAFL

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dr beulahthebrit; Reasonable story until the last sentence, guns, unless something like a shotgun are not only illegal but almost impossible to obtain in the UK, even obtaining a shotgun isn't easy. There is a lengthy process, police checks and reams of paperwork. So sorry, him turning up with a gun, is very unlikely.

KusunaKusunaover 2 years ago

Ok, that's a good start...I hope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Suburban England.... hubby turns up with a gun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Bye bye Mark

Impo_64Impo_64over 2 years ago

His wife left him and what does he do? Fucks another man's wife and fuck up their marriage also...1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You have no idea what you're talking about. 1/5

OldBrummieOldBrummieover 2 years ago

Loved the last line.

Yes, it is possible to get a gun in the UK if you know the right people. But it could just as easily have been a replica just to make Mark freeze for a moment while Danny takes his first punch. After that it would all be over.

KarnevilKarnevilover 2 years ago

Nice ending, karma. He gets what he deserves, though even if its possible to get a gun in Britain its not likely. After all we're much too civilised.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 2 years ago

Oh shit. Never saw that coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Cute ending

Regguy69Regguy69over 2 years ago

Fucking another man’s wife is a good way to learn about gun barrels, as you’re likely to have a few pointed at you.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Excellent story. I love a good cliffhanger. He got too arrogant for his own good and now he may have to pay for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the ending.

john_sixfooterjohn_sixfooterover 2 years ago

"Shit. He's got a gun." Best ending ever. 5⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not in suburban England. More like suburban Virginia or Connecticut.

Rocky62Rocky62over 2 years ago

Well at least he got his rocks off with the slut before he got his balls shot off …. Haa haa

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 2 years ago

Lots of action sports carry an element of danger, whether it’s downhill skiing, automobile racing, or fucking other men’s wives.

Sandman2025Sandman2025over 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for all your wonderful comments. I read them all, the postive and constructive criticism alike!

As regards the ending, I wanted to give a degree of finality to the story that another weapon wouldn’t give. Such a form of weapon is not unheard of in England and can be found easily by a person with the right connections.

Happy reading.

Sandman2025

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yeah like bring a knife to a gun fight. Very funny but enjoyable read

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Longevity...........don't fuck another man's wife.

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