by mypenname3000
Great story enjoyed it from beginning to end can’t wait until the next part releases.
I've always thought the sub-classes of bimbo should be ones like classy, slutty, muscle, goth, leather, etc.
Can already tell this is headed toward the harem mode bullshit that seems to ruin most hot I/T beginnings. Resist the temptation to ruin it.
I can see people trying to steal other peoples bimbos. Aside from being a sex worker, what possible job could she have since she is the only source of income for the family. I figure with her lowered IQ and not so stellar memory retention, she couldn’t even work at a strip joint since she would forget to hold on to the pole unless it was the pole sticking out of someone’s pants.
Yet another great story arc, let her get on with those oral skills as I'd like to see that snotty sister get the spankingvslut bimbo skills
Maybe one of the trees specializes into a job path like stripper or model, so she isn't absolutely moronic forever lol. Might be interesting to see if she suddenly gets good at pole dancing, after all. Maybe belly dancing? Who knows lol
Some thoughts:
Really aggressive on making the women unlikable, at least in the case of the mom, sister, and neighbor.
I loved how quick the switch from angry to horny and stupid was and how it was processed by the protagonist.
It does already kind of seem like the teacher and possibly yoga neighbor like the protagonist, or the attention, and that they wouldn't even need the app, though the corruption aspect sounds hot.
My votes are for Huge Boobs, Creampie, and DP Lover, creampie especially if mixed with a breeding/pregnancy/lactation kink/fetish.
Overall, liked it a lot and am really excited to see where it goes!
Hot start to the story. Maybe sister next for some mommy and daughter time 😉
Really good start, love the intro to all the girls. But man that sex scene was boring. I checked out when I reread the same 4 paragraphs saying the same thing just worded differently. How many times can you rewrite "I fucked her cunt hard and my balls hit her taint", or "While I fucked her pussy, I squeezed her big, soft tits"? Change it up, try new things and stop repeating yourself. Big turn off ...
Just another stupid harem story. Bimbo doesn’t mean mentally disabled. You’ve written the mother like she’s had a brain injury. Weak story. Could’ve been hot, could’ve made it a special slutty mommy- son relationship but you followed the same tired woman-hating harem bullshit. Be better.
Oh huge boobs bimbo. I’d love to read in the next chapter about the sister’s reaction the next morning to seeing her mom cooking breakfast in nothing but an apron with huge boobs. Then hearing how brainless the mom is now.
So hot. More please.
Good story. I only wonder about bimbofying the bread winner of the house. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Was this the next story about THE FIGURE? I have to say not really a big fan of this since everyone gets so stupid.