All Comments on 'The Bimbo Virus'

Interesting story but could use some serious proofreading. Lots of little things through out the story.

You're a little too liberal with the T-slur, sissy.

Like I really tried to like like it, I liked it more after like I got further like into it . . .

Didn't like like it beyond average on like account of like too much like in it.

LOL some anons are mad.

Put up your works hons.

@transpuppet you can block me I assume?

@Sissyhalo1,

You can infect me anytime! Really!!! If there actually was such a virus, I would be doing my best to get infected! I'm a total bottom, I already dress as a girl and I don't even have to be hard to have a "sissygasm" while my boyfriend is fucking me. I don't want to be a real girl, but I would love to look like one, have real breasts and a little tiny cock and little marble size balls.

It's exceptionally poorly written, even by self-submitted smut standards. I suppose I shouldn't expect anything better from someone who uses slurs and pejoratives so freely, though.

Also "so you post a story" isn't a valid defense of your mediocrity. Do better, unpack your self hate, and stop posting your Ls publicly.

Sorry, anyone using 'like' as punctuation should be banned from talking let alone writing. The story could have been good but 1/3 of the way in I had to stop purely because of the 'like' count.

Horrible.