by stircrazy18
My personal fantasies often involve lots of build up, huge backstories, anticipation, confusion, and a happy unfolding. But it looks like I’m frustrating readers more than tantalizing them. Hahaha. Can’t win ‘em all. I wrote this one for a friend, who noticed and felt everything I hoped he would. So its purpose was served. I’ll work on fewer characters and a more focused plot next time.
1*--- I may give you a better score if you finish the story and there are way to many holes in this part.