All Comments on 'The Birthday Party'

Pretty Hot!! Lets here about "later" soon!!!

As often is the case for female writers this story is totally undervalued. I loved it! 5*

A well written story and deserved to be well marked.

Sadly the subject matter left me somewhat cold. Both her friends husband and her have acted despicably.

She hasn't given any thoughts about her husband who is working to support both her and their child.

Seemingly no regrets, or even guilt. Just a stupid woman who is set to lose the lifestyle she is accustomed to.

Hot story. I could feel the risk.

Still, it’s more than just getting your clothes straight. Sex has a destinctive odor as well, and that lingers.

Only fair that the husband has sex with Kara in the next story. Cuckolding a loved one seems to be the normal thing to do on this site. Time to cuckold the cuckolder.

Loved it

Loved it very slutty you should go full slut and fuck him

Lovely story but bulshit comments why are you people on an erotic story site. There is nothing wrong with some play between good friends when both are consenting adults. It would have been more fun if the wife would have been involved though but maybe that will happen in the followup story.

It was very hot. Had me waiting to see if you would get caught or get away with it. Liked it alot, can't wait for your next post.

Cheating makes sex hotter no doubt. I love to cheat and the story hits that lust

Awesome story! And I don't think you need to feel guilty or anything because it was a spontaneous thing that happens to a lot of people. So my advice is to enjoy the memory and give your husband the same kind of blow job, if for no other reason to watch his face light up!

Great story

T

Well written. Definitely kept my interest. Top marks.

It was a really good setting, and I found it very well written - very realistic and plausible which adds to the frisson of an illicit thrill. The ongoing mixture of the escapades inside the house and checking the activities outside... excellent.

Part 2 is eagerly awaited...

(oh, and I hope you're basically ignoring the "confused" people commenting on this story who seem incapable of differentiating reality from fiction)

Now for the BTB next chapter..

DOL

Loved it. Felt authentic and well written. Sure it's a taboo subject, but this author composed her story in a realistic and sexy manner. Hope there's more to follow!

this was a good read but why didn't she feel bad for betraying her Husband by fooling around behind his back with another man ? doe's she not Love / Respect her own Husband ? how would Her & Jon feel if Kara slept with her Husband behind their back's .... anyway hope you write more of this story soon ....

This story pulled me in right away. Very hot. Looking forward to part 2

I'm hoping you have a second chapter cuming! Don't forget your "loving husband!

Hope Andrew pounds the hell out of Kara to the point they can't get out of bed.

Such a hot story I can't wait to see where you take it next please continue this tale I love your writing. Ignore the haters if they can't handle cheating stories and exploring its ertoic tabboo then they should stop reading them.

Good story. 5-stars.

Still waiting for part 2.

Absolutely lusty. Brilliant

And the best part is, we know she'll do it again! If not with Jon, then with someone else!

No bio so hopefully you are not married; for writing a story like this may reveal true desires. Condolences to hubby if you are.

If you're a dude, congrats on stirring up bad feelings.

where is the rest of the story

I wonder what happenned later that night

Now we need part 2 and 3 and any more

Let's get the second chapter, please!