All Comments on 'The Birthday Party Ch. 03'

This was so good. I hope you do a follow up soon.

Not your best series. But still very hot

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Sadly, as a long term fan … not your best work. The writing remains worthy, but the theme was incongruous and non sexy. In general, recent works have concentrated on the female demeaning the male. I’m sure this appeals to some readers, but the majority of your work that appeals to me involves dominant men. … however, this is your adventure, and though I didn’t enjoy this story, I’m looking forward to your next one.

Great story showing a mothers love is nothing compared to her cunt. You please the cunt and nothing else matters!

I read the series purely because of the opening paragraph in this chapter. What could be more taboo than a woman who gets off on being a bitch to her son? I really hope you continue this, or failing that, maybe write a new story around that central premise.

Welp, this is now in train-wreck territory, from loving Mom of questionable morals to total witch.

This entire chapter was without excitement for me, but I think I will continue to watch the train-wreck.

There has to be something more, or we shall see if a Mom, who quite inappropriately (and she started this whole mess off) has the potential to help her son find fulfilling and happy sexuality, and what sharing to expect from a partner, instead helps him along the path to being miserable all his life.

Happy Birthday!

This went off on a tangent I did not enjoy

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