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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Enjoying so far!

cpark1170cpark1170almost 2 years ago

I'd like a description of the Captain. I'm trying to get a visual of him. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow, the scene where he forces her to eat from his hand was the hottest execution of that trope I've ever read. Usually, it doesn't do much for me but this time it was absolute smutty gold.

nthusiasticnthusiastic10 months ago

I do hope the submissions will be getting longer. Writing this good deserves room to grow.

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Long time reader, first time writer. I've been working on the Black Rise for a while and finally took the plunge to post. Jan 23 - 2024 - Chapter 9 is submitted.

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