by ret123
This was the best funniest erotic story I've read in a LONG time! I hope there are more chapters!
Quite how you are going to take this into "sex in the street" without the hero getting arrested, I am sure I don't know. But look forward to finding out!
Definitely well written and shows promise. However I was disappointed that having made such a big thing in the first half of the story about all the clothes she was wearing, you should have at least given us a clue as to why.
Great idea well written, but we need to know about those clothes....
Liked it left alot to the imagination which is great. Keep up the good work
Like the subject matter and the suspense building up, but it lacks real involvement IMHO. Could be much more captivating with expanding on personality and character.
She just needs another cock for her mouth to quiet her down. She’d make a great girl to have in the backroom at a party. I’d love the embarrassment of being talking with people as we hear someone making my wife scream like a whore in the backroom.