All Comments on 'The Blind Date Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
maybe I was just in the mood

This was the best funniest erotic story I've read in a LONG time! I hope there are more chapters!

topcattoponetopcattoponealmost 9 years ago
I hope that there is more of this.

Quite how you are going to take this into "sex in the street" without the hero getting arrested, I am sure I don't know. But look forward to finding out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Definitely well written and shows promise. However I was disappointed that having made such a big thing in the first half of the story about all the clothes she was wearing, you should have at least given us a clue as to why.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
The clothes

Great idea well written, but we need to know about those clothes....

Shadowforce1Shadowforce1almost 9 years ago
So far so good.

Liked it left alot to the imagination which is great. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Like the subject matter and the suspense building up, but it lacks real involvement IMHO. Could be much more captivating with expanding on personality and character.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

She just needs another cock for her mouth to quiet her down. She’d make a great girl to have in the backroom at a party. I’d love the embarrassment of being talking with people as we hear someone making my wife scream like a whore in the backroom.

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