by ret123
She just needs another cock for her mouth to quiet her down. She’d make a great girl to have in the backroom at a party. I’d love the embarrassment of being talking with people as we hear someone making my wife scream like a whore in the backroom.
Like the subject matter and the suspense building up, but it lacks real involvement IMHO. Could be much more captivating with expanding on personality and character.
Liked it left alot to the imagination which is great. Keep up the good work
Great idea well written, but we need to know about those clothes....
Definitely well written and shows promise. However I was disappointed that having made such a big thing in the first half of the story about all the clothes she was wearing, you should have at least given us a clue as to why.
Quite how you are going to take this into "sex in the street" without the hero getting arrested, I am sure I don't know. But look forward to finding out!
This was the best funniest erotic story I've read in a LONG time! I hope there are more chapters!