All Comments on 'The Blind Date Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

She just needs another cock for her mouth to quiet her down. She’d make a great girl to have in the backroom at a party. I’d love the embarrassment of being talking with people as we hear someone making my wife scream like a whore in the backroom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Like the subject matter and the suspense building up, but it lacks real involvement IMHO. Could be much more captivating with expanding on personality and character.

Shadowforce1Shadowforce1almost 9 years ago
So far so good.

Liked it left alot to the imagination which is great. Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
The clothes

Great idea well written, but we need to know about those clothes....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Definitely well written and shows promise. However I was disappointed that having made such a big thing in the first half of the story about all the clothes she was wearing, you should have at least given us a clue as to why.

topcattoponetopcattoponealmost 9 years ago
I hope that there is more of this.

Quite how you are going to take this into "sex in the street" without the hero getting arrested, I am sure I don't know. But look forward to finding out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
maybe I was just in the mood

This was the best funniest erotic story I've read in a LONG time! I hope there are more chapters!

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