All Comments on 'The Blue Key Pt. 01'

Not a bad story, writing seems pretty good. But the names..... The names are so hard to read off-hand..... While I tried, half way through, I still kept pausing to pronouce them. I ended up just skipping reading the names and hoped I could still understand the stoy. I managed well enough I suppose

I understand that you're prolly not English

But your choice of names

Are kinda difficult for me honestly

I want to know the mystery of blue key. And also looking forward to its sequel