All Comments on 'The Box'

Very interesting read! Short and sweet. I really like how mysterious the beginning was. I actually think the lack of explanation makes it much more effective. Plus, I like the conditioning, but that may just be a big bias of mine! Anyways, great job! 5/5.

This was really interesting I want to see what happens next!

More please. Starts off really well. I wonder what will happen next?