All Comments on 'The Box Pt. 01'

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AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 8 years ago
I like it, keep writing

You have my attention. What happens next? I like porn too. xoxoxox Annette

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
EXCELLENT CHARACTER

Terri is a wonderful character. Committed to her family and holding beliefs she wants to impart upon her children. Loved the confusion your story has begun to unfold concerning Terri being uncertain of herself over many years. Not allowing main character to jump immediately into a girl on girl affair after finding both son and husband holding on to a stash of pornographic literature was for the best. I also enjoyed the casualness of Pam. That will be a tough character to flesh out, and what I mean by saying this is giving Pam balance as a married woman with overt Bi-female natured tendencies. I am looking forward to reading more.

Please keep some hair on a female in your story. It gives that female a mind of her own perspective in decision making.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
1*

cuck fag shit.

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2about 8 years ago
5

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Ask yourself why the fuck des this fool read these stories, every one of them?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
1*

Vote 1* for every story rated by THE FAT WHORE (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!

bonnietaylor2bonnietaylor2about 8 years ago
5

eat shit dear annony!!

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