All Comments on 'The Boy Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
localized

Using localized ism's that aren't known in other places confuses the readers. Best to not use any than use and lose readers. What the hell is "A levels" means nothing to a vast number of readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good, filthy story!

And never mind the bollocks: MOST people can figure out the few bits of local color, even us Yanks.

Thanks for posting; we'll look for more.

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