by Mark_Michigan
Interesting story idea. Maybe have the mom tease them with sexy clothing leaving fresh used panties for them to use, Until they get hooked on Milf porn?
Now that was a good idea for a story. She now has to figure out how to get the boys mothers together at a time the boys are there so they can sneak down and “catch” the boys in the “hard glory” and blow them. Them an other chapter where the mothers swap sons.
Great start, well written. My only suggestion is maybe finish writing the story before you publish it? It's kind of a waste of time reading such a small part of an erotic tale
Hot hot. Love watching group masturbating. My son and his 2 buddies do that in the hot tub. Mom ought to walk downstairs during one of their sessions “can I be of service”?
Great potential for a series. Sons and mothers. Swaping. Involve a few femalevteachers.
I enjoyed it. I think it's a good start and can't wait to see where you take it. I'm writing a similar story as you but different. I think the webcam idea was a great one. Keep up the good work. I for sure will be following your progress.
Fantastic realistic story. Some moms have had similar experience catching son and friends jerking off. It can be a very fun and arousing experience.
I think Tica21 had the right idea. No guy/guy stuff going on. They're all just hot for mom. Which should happen, but not easily so. They need to work for it. Then gradually work in others. Sisters, aunts, cousins, teachers, girlfriends. But limit the guys to the original Boys Club. Make it a series. I'm betting it's very well received. 5/5 stars.
Dewey Cheatham
Hot ending…it seems like you really do like panties…giggles and pulls a satiny pair up…so tight around a throbbing cock…
Your writing style is as fresh as uh pair of pussy stained panties, fresh out the dryer! I found your use of Kristy stream of consciousness, instead of the typical endless dialogue that so many novice authors use on this platform, as cool as a Miles Davis solo from the early sixties, where less is often so much more!
I was disappointed when I realized you have yet to post that next part of your short story; ‘Boys Club.’ I think it could become a 21st century version of ‘The Graduate,’ with Tommy’s smokin’ hot MILF as a new ‘Mrs. Robinson’ for the ages.
What a fun story, Now I am looking forward to the next one to find out if more of her panties get used.