All Comments on 'The Branson Family Pt. 03'

Excellent series that just keeps getting better and better! There is something for everyone! I love the twist and turns of the plot line! Very well written!

a great imagination at work in this story. Really enjoy the development and the unexpected turns and twists. The remark of Darius ""I'm not going to take her virginity Lindsey. You are..." at the end was a great setup for the next chapter. Looking forward to more....super work...

loved it Missy........ you write well and have a very erotic mind too......

Joe

hope its not another big dick she falls under his spell story like we have read soooooooooooooooo many times befor time hubby kicked his arse

I was hoping for more gay/humiliation action. I thought Steve and Joe could suck the big black dick, please consider going forward. You already set it up where Lindsey is unsatisfied but the men in her family

5 stars, can't wait until Lindsey is knocked up with Darius black baby, 45 Year old white women having another baby 😜 yummy, and hopefully her 18 year old daughter Melissa with get knocked as well by Darius. How humiliating it with be for hubby pushing the baby stroller into church on Sunday morning with a black baby. Love the humiliation that Lindsey shows her son like pissing in his mouth😋😋😋😋 delicious. Please continue with more water sports and maybe Lindsey cans put her Cuckold hubby and boys in panties. Lindsey need to get a queen of spades tattoo on her big breasts before she starts to breastfeed her black baby. Please continue with the next chapter.

I loved when you had Joe down his load from the condom, when Lindsey says, you know you want this Cuck, that makes me think(hope) she has plans to have hubby be Darious bitch? I think he would be awesome for Joe to be drunk or drugged and have the power couple film him getting in his knees for the Bull????? Please consider

I love the idea of Joe, successful businessman with a big dick, being emasculated by first his wife and then his banker, I hope you go that way? It seems you are considering it, love the story

and then Bob? And Katie? This is getting delicious! :P Keep us entertained, perverts that we are! This ride, I can tell, will have many more stops!

With respect, I loved chapter 2 and was anxious for 3, but a little disappointed, not enough sex, nor details of the sex, I was looking forward to the mother son sex but the candle wax punishment seem ridiculous, the mother judging the son while being in his room for sex seemed incredibly hypocritical, I did like you having Joe continue to be taken down a peg by his wife, but you never followed up on clarification to what he thinks about his wife being fucked by another man? I love the bi sex parts of the story and do hope the husband, and son get taken, over powered, seduced by black cock, perhaps new bbc characters can be added? I also love the daughter being prey to the power couple, I look forward to the next chapter

Chapter 2 you made it clear that Lyndsey was showing Joe while in bed with him how she got taken by another man, yet you never went and followed up on how he felt about it? Joe ate load after load from his wife’s pussy yet you didn’t give any thought to how the hubby would have been curious why there was so much cum in her? That could have been awesome if you had Lyndsey ask her hubby how the load tasted? I am glad you are going to continue, lots of possibilities

Great Story!! have been waiting very patiently for the next chapter....hope it is soon. Can't wait to see how linsey takes her daughter's virginity..

Another great story, Sweet Melissa! Pastor Snow certainly knows how to counsel the mature Belle. The good Pastor should find his way into the next chapter, also. He might need to counsel the Belle's young daughter, as well.

Hi still waiting for more chapters. Did you post them elsewhere ? John Jmfoxx@aol..com

I wanna see Steve and more than him, Joe, get blacked by bbc, who reading this agrees?

I have really enjoyed so far. Any idea when new chapters will be available ? John

When is the next chapter. Really enjoyed

Missy,

This story is so amazing and your writing is wonderful and erotic too. You have a way with words that puts a vision in my mind's eye.

joe

joemm1961@yahoo.com

Wow, cant wait for the next one

Amazing story writing! Please continue!!

More don't leave us hanging

Git to continue with daughter and son do it too

we desperately need more of this.