All Comments on 'The Breeder Pt. 01'

Great story (like always); however there's one thing I think you missed when rewriting/converting the story to its current form. The sentence "Her Master was tall and broad-chested; even as a woman of eighteen, Audrey was only a little more than half his height," doesn't really make sense; assuming Audrey is a (very short) human woman, her master would have to be at least three meters/nine feet tall for him to be almost twice as tall as her!

Aside from that, everything is great; love to see more stories about denied girls from you ;3

@researchertalloran Good catch! You're right, that definitely isn't correct, haha. It's a bit of a process to correct stories on Literotica once they're posted, so I probably won't edit just for that, but I'll make a note of it.