All Comments on 'The Brother-in-Law'

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Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

Another Masterful Story! Gosh how do you always scare the crap out of me as I tend to identify with the main character! 5 stars for great writing and another exciting story. Thanks so much! Love a chapter #2

rodryder44rodryder44over 1 year ago

What did hubby expect? Happy should have suspected something was up when Max's story to Cam didn't match the conversation he had with Max. He had to know something was rotten in Denmark from the conversation with Roger and Anne. Goodbye Cam. Erotic as hell

dynasty919dynasty919over 1 year ago

after some very good set-ups, the story suddenly ends. it sucks man.

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

so why doesn't she get much more of it

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I am a chuck writer so move on if you don't like chuck stories. Keep your shit to yourself.