All Comments on 'The Bubblebath'

You have a flair for sensuous language. Hope to see more soon!

You've given us a superb snapshot of the mating game. A sequel would be nice--they probably do this sort of thing more than once.

Love the story... the way it builds up... and then the sensual intensity.

So little dialogue, but seems so natural. These two have an intimate, unspoken bond and it really shows. Very hot.

WOW!! What a sensual erotic hot sexy story. If this is your first there need to be many more.

Great little story. I now wanting to find my own little note at the door!

Matt_Next_Door

Great word pictures. I felt like I was in the room.

If a picture is worth a thousand words, that story is worth a whole album with the images you painted. Amazing detail, I could picture every bit of it!!

I once not too long ago wrote a story using similar setting and interaction. I liked your story.. very entertaining.

Loved this! I wan't expecting this and was pleasantly surprised.

...reach into my fantasies and put it in a story? Well written, very erotic, thank you!!! Now, I, ummm, need to go take care of something...*wink*

And exciting, as well! I loved the detail.

I don't think I've read a story as skillfully crafted in second person. Yes there is first person, but so much is second person and I think it helps build the suspense. The woman (1st person) knows the plan, while the scene unfolds for the man (2nd person).

I also love the balance of detail with erotic ambience.

What a talented writer...Great job, great story! Very hot.

No smutt, just good honest to god pleasure. Beautifully written. And damn it, I felt aroused!!!!

Gave you the highest rating, Makes me want to slide into the tub with you

I love the Pace & the Detail.

Nicely done Kentucky Lady.

My mind flooded with all sorts of dirty filthy lovely thoughts as I read that!

Why is my mouth watering ?

I loved it!

Very Erotic and exciting, the build up and the Ending had me quite stimulated .. Not to mention hard .. :o

I really enjoyed reading your story, it was very sensual and well written. Very well done young lady. Beautiful piece.

great writing so very hot wish i was in the bubblebath with you

a beautiful portrait of love.

But my shower has room for two! :+))

You're invited!

Open arms await you!

I would love to come home to this scene. The way in which you describe it all is what is most captivating. Thank you for sharing your fantasy!

You know what you like. The guy better be as good as he can or you will find one who will satisfy the wanting you have.