All Comments on 'The Bullpen Pt. 01'

How to keep employees well motivated! I’m looking forward to reading more but I’m hoping that you’ll include kink specific information in the Tags as the story continues? Some of the things you listed in the story are hard limits of mine, I suppose I’m saying that it would be appreciated if you could include the relevant tags it becomes a horrible turn off when reading erotica to be suddenly overwhelmed by something you find non erotic at best or traumatic at worst.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (UK)

Literally the best thing I've ever read on here. The internet doesn't have enough gentle Dom stories and I'm SO excited to see where you take this, and I can't wait to get to know the guys more!!

So excited for the rest of this series please keep writing!

What's with the changing tense and POV? It's impossible to keep track of who's talking and when things occurred.