by RonanJWilkerson
I truly never want this story to end every episode? (chapter) is so much fun.
The closing statement that Belinda is 14 is problematic. The opening list of characters, and references in previous chapters, puts her at 16 (or more?); she is less than 18 but closer in age to Leslie (who turned 18 in a previous chapter) her friend and musical mentor.
I found you a couple months ago because of the Quarenteam serieses, which I greatly enjoy. I'm reading several authors versions of them. But I'm actually enjoying your Bunker series as much or maybe even more than most of the Quarenteam contributions.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you
nuts. every once in a while, I slip a detail. Thanks for the catch.
I'm loving this almost as much as the quaranteam spin off. please keep writing this it's getting interesting.
2 comments: 1st, I really enjoy this story arc, maybe even more than some of the QT stories. 2nd, I hope the BA collapses in on itself. LOL Please keep working on this!