All Comments on 'The Bus Station'

by CharliMac

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BelleCanzutoBelleCanzutoover 3 years ago

I really enjoyed the simplicity of the set up for this. And I like the way you captured the dynamic between them.

passionsdivapassionsdivaover 3 years ago
Great writing!

Enjoyed your writing immensely. It captured the true essence of submission to the man who claims his submissive.

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Charli Mac is an Erotic Romance writer who loves sci-fi and Fantasy, but who also dabbles in BDSM short stories.