All Comments on 'The Business Conference Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
It’s Great, but...

It’s just not believable. He wins too big for no reason. He’s not portrayed as being the hottest dude ever, he doesn’t have any business to give, he’s not incredibly smooth, he’s just a random nice guy who gets two hot women to give him everything he wants for no reason.

It’s just not believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice try

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good premise.

No foreplay. No preliminaries. No reluctance about anything that needs to be overcome.

Rushed.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Come on people, this is an AMAZING story of nearly every company rep's fantasy conference experience; that's right, a fantasy! just enjoy a well written story about an R rated Disney special

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