All Comments on 'The Busty Doctors Wife Ch. 01'

Great start

Will Babs and Judy be next?

Beautifully written, 5 Stars

Interesting beginning 5 Star's

Fantastic story. Looking forward to more. Thanks

Great story would like to hear if he gets his mum and Judy in but carry on loom forward to the next part. Top marks

I love this story and hope for many more chapters. Very well written and I hope all of the women are bisexual.

Dialogue was really stilted and disjointed, difficult to read. You need to add some emotion and affection to make this somewhat believable.

Dialogue was really stilted and disjointed, difficult to read. You need to add some emotion and affection to make this somewhat believable. Physical descriptions need a bit of work as well.

interesting story line. but it needs more detail and depth when bedding the women.

Good story, but it lacked 'feeling'. The dialogue could use a bit of work as well as it seemed to lack emotion, sounding almost robotic. I would recommend the use of an editor. They would be able to proofread, correcting any grammar mistakes, as well as providing some ideas or insight on story structure and dialogue, or changes that could make the story 'flow' better. Just a little help would take this from a good story to a great one. 4⭐ Rafe

What happened to part 2

You just don't even attempt to make them believable!! All your stories seem to follow the same pattern. Older woman strips off for youngster no qualms. Then Lo and Behold he's got a huge cock! She then turns from a respectable older woman into a complete obscenely mouthed dirty minded slut!! Of course they use each other's names ALL THE TIME!! Stilted bullshit!!

Boring, hard to read, and ultimately, not worth the trouble.