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All Comments on 'The Busty Doctor's Wife Ch. 02'

by jd8406

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A great story 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This needs another chapter, exciting sex

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Your stories make my cunt wet...thank you 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A great read and looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

what awful writing, it is robotic and you have no narration so it sounds even less natural. Read some highly rated stories and learn from them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story, but it's still too stiff (pardon the pun). Story structure has improved, but the story still lacks emotion, giving it an almost animatronic feeling, the movements are all there, but not the 'flow'. 4⭐ Rafe

Davy47Davy47about 1 year ago

I loved it.....

KittyLover80KittyLover8012 months ago

Wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. Very interesting plot. Looking forward to each additional chapter. 5 stars.

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