All Comments on 'The Camping Trip'

I hate cuckold/sharing/whore wives/no consequences stories. Oh I did say I hate cuck stories right?

Considering he’s a homosexual, what does it matter if Kay cuts him off?

About time he comes out of the closet.

Oh, by the way, this is LW, it stands for “Loving Wife”, not Gay Male, they have their own group.

Put it in the right fucking group you stupid halfwit.

Sounds like a great time for sure

You need an editor..she goes from being tied up to grabbing his ass then she is tied up again. The other guy is chris then rob them Chris?

Chris / Rob ??? Which is it ?

another travel log butchering of first person perspective. just do third person! it'll still be garbage but you'll have one slightly less annoyed reader (me).

a little dialog maybe next time? and some build-up? we don't know these people and have no investment in them. even a quick fap story needs context and pacing.

this feels like a bad rough draft that the author just threw onto the site. 1/5. definitely the worst thing i've ever read on Lit.

Please crawl back under your stone and stop bothering people with this drivel

Drop the "true story" garbage. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth and onto the pages. It does nothing for the story and just makes us laugh at you. And next time try to write a better story. This was terrible. Barely an opening paragraph, let alone a story and the technical part was horrible as well as the story being bad.

Still the idiots are not dying out, neither in reality nor in fantasy. This author and his story prove it to us!

7 mistakes in the first paragraph alone. It didn't improve from there. The most ridiculous plot I've seen in ages. Find another hobby.

domehard19 seems to lack the cognitive ability to distinguish between that which makes a story Loving Wives qualified or something of lesser worth. This rag of used nature belongs in any of several other categories, Non-consent perhaps, as Kat was not informed by Alex of the (irrefutably stupid) deal he made with Chris or provided the opportunity to decline beforehand. Perhaps she would have said no. Maybe this should have been posted in a fetish oriented category, it seems to have plenty of that action. More likely something along the lines of guy, group or bisexual would be the best choice as the ending tells the true tale of future content! And what the heck was that brief interlude where crewmember Rob beamed down from the USS Enterprise to replace Chris for a minute? BAD, just plain bad 1☆ - TANSTAAFL

Quotation marks are NOT optional.

Really weak gay male story, in cuckold’s clothing, out of place in LW.

I thought this story was very well written and enjoyed it. As only sporting 6 inches on a good day, I'd like to see my wife fuffilled as the same way. I'd skip the part about getting pegged myself though. Lol

Another author if the same old idea. Wake up and move on to something better.

Why is it that newbies always write stories like this that everyone knows are going to be garbage. Is it in there DNA to write such crap then to top it all off class it as true story. Then if they couldn’t top it off anymore they want to ruin the loving wife category by writing such stupid stuff these are the stories that we don’t want in this category. Even writing this makes the writer look like a prat . No person would write such an embarrassing story like this no matter who they were . True or not no person in there right mind would tell this type of story. It would to embarrassing to tell anyone so you can tell it’s not a true story.

JFC...another cuck writer using a new pen name but still trying the "this is a real" story. No it an't nancy, and no you didn't cuck yourself, you outed yourself here.

Now do that in your real life so you dont continue to drag LW down even further than the rest of your ilk keeps trying to do these days.

BTW this idiocy gives you worthless trash writers away as retreads " Little did she know I was already thinking of a way to set this up again but that will have to wait for another story as it hasn't happened yet."

Mentally ill people being abused.... Part 29,856.

This is your nightmare I really hope you are living it. I hope your wife is fucking around on you and ends up with an STD or Aids.

Poor writing, poor story , no need to continue pal, for the sake off writing just stop thx

More like you 1 stard yourself.

That was bad. 1 Star.

Very hot story!!!! Congratulations!!!

I gave this story a 1, simply because there is no lower grades to be given. The writing was horrible. The person who wrote this trash, is a moron.

this goes under gay not loving wife

Not really a story with a beginning, middle, and end. More of a vignette I guess.

It started badly: The last four words of para 1 were the first four words of para 2.

It didn't get any better. It might possibly have developed into a decent story, though I doubt that very much.

I just couldn't wade through any more of this grade 2 writing. Sorry.

Sounds like 26thNC really enjoyed his first butt fuck.I’m sure it will not be his last.

Is there any shit story that the cuck OOAA doesn't approve of? Where did this author learn how to write? Does he know what the word "grammar" means? Does he know how to punctuate sentences? Worse yet, does he know how to write an entertaining story? What happened to the monitors of this site, they used to be awful picky.

Got confusing when Chris became rob then Chris again

I absolutely loved the story but we want to know about the awesome orgasm that Alex had while he was being fucked by Chris. We also want to hear about how Alex give Chris an awesome blow job on their second date. We also want to hear more about how Alex's wife enjoys fucking Chris and the other guys that Alex's wife introduces into their love life now that Alex is a cuck.

Oh these anonymous bitches, they're growing thicker than fleas on a goat's ass. Unfortunately they've not nearly as intelligent. One of them has a really bad crush on me, and just cries out to be noticed.

Did they get together with him and have both the White and the husband suck his sack and take his c** in her mouth they get another c** in her p**** to come in the guy's ass again and today that they make him wear dresses somewhere along the line

Last time I'll read this author. POS LP

I have a true story . My wife and me had a rock n roll band back in the 80's that toured the country and we sometimes opened a concert and sometimes we were were the back up band and one night at a big night club while we were in between sets on a break my wife was holding some jagoffs hand and even kissed him on the cheek and fro where i was sitting they could not see me while i drank my beer so i watched them and then it was time to go back on stage so i made a mental note to myself to address it on the way home and the night finished and we were driving home that night my wife asked me why i was so quite as i usually talk a lot while driving home and i looked over to her and said well i saw you tonight but you could not see me and the next time i see you do what you did i will kick your ass and if you ever cheat or decide a big cock is worth dying for remember you have to sleep at night because if you do that i will kill you while you sleep . i never had anymore problems with my wife as i wanted and needed to touch her soul and i did do that.