All Comments on 'The Captain's Nymph Ch. 02'

Please continue this story. I want to know what happen next in this story.

I like this story!! Please keep writing...

When is the next chapter coming?

You are doing perfect! I can't imagine it can get better but I won't complain if it does ;)

I especially like there's space for a bit of romance to develope . For me 'roughness' in an erotic story is another word for passion.Combined with a dash of romance it's heaven!

Too much stereotypical 'roughness' is just bdsm. Try to avoid it .

Just saying my opinion doesn't mean it's right..

Thanks

To 'this could be really good', I hope it does become exactly that after the story, which is fully in my head, develops. As to dialogue, I'm continually making an effort to improve at both character-accurate dialogue and somewhat historical sounding dialogue. This being my first attempt at an erotic story (big project for a first try), I hope my characters flesh out as my understanding of this style does. It can only improve from here! Comments are always appreciated.

But the characters seem simple and one dimensional. I don't believe Beckett feels anything for her but lust. The dialogue is meh, she doesn't want to be raped because "tis shameful" Really? Makes for a pretty wimpy female lead. And that Beckett would have allowed a child-like woman to raped as well.... No redeeming qualities at all! That being said I've read plenty of stories of the captured beauty and the handsome, roguish pirate so I think you have the framework to make an interesting tale, if that's your goal.

That was delicious.. Can't wait for the third course

More please, more!!!!!!!!

Awesome awesome awesome nugh said :-)

MORE!!!