All Comments on 'The Car Show'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

All was great, but you should have left out truck and trailer stats. No way in any hell is a 1 ton dodge dually pulling anything over 20k pounds, much less a 150 foot, 75 ton load at 60 mph. You would need two semis, a massively modified trailer, a multi state police escort, permits for each state and the guy would not be able to afford the rig much less the haul on a cab driver pay

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

How does a cabbie have so many assets, property, vehicles etc, and how do two people during a bottle of wine and a bottle and a half of bourbon each in one night and be capable of driving the next day?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

There's elements of the story that the writer left out, as for the alcohol, it is possible to drink that much and be able to drive. I think th assets aren't as imortant as the context of the story.

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