All Comments on 'The Caretaker's Children Pt. 03'

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hardone2069hardone20698 months ago

Good job, well written, engaging; decent plot line and smooth reading. Three stars, two bars....;{. )

GuiltyGrinGuiltyGrin8 months ago

What a fascinating series this is shaping up to be!

Mysteries and perils abound in what began as a simple futa-love story. Amy and Kate's uncontrollable passion and perfectly compatible bodies seem to be made for each other; yet their captors dismiss them as embarrassing mistakes, eligible for termination. The scope of their threat seems unlimited.

I wonder what other turns this story will take. Will more of the grown test subjects appear? Will Ginny find a fitting girlfriend? What will the good doctor on his secluded ranch have to say about all of this?

I'm hooked and I look forward to more!

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