All Comments on 'The Cauldron of Tears'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Halloween

Skillfully written with subtle transitions that leaves the reader feeling he/she actually viewed the events depicted. Happy Halloween.

VickieTernVickieTernover 4 years ago
Imagined magic,

ranging from the sensuously practical to the orgiastically frenzied, the barely conceived to the intensely experienced. And all in a quiet middle class neighborhood! Well told, with wit and of all things restraint pressing against gratified desire! I especially like the way it can be read either way but most satisfyingly, both ways.

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My stories generally explore what married life could be like for a couple who are committed to each other but want to explore more and enjoy some amount of risk. Plausibility is the general goal for the genres that permit it. Enjoy! (and please comment!) Questions, suggest...