All Comments on 'The Cave'

Perhaps your best. More nc than fetish, but you seem to like that category. I wonder if you would get more readers by switching. Very intense, but the victim should have more to say, or protest, or rebel. That might make for a worthy second act.

Loved it when is the rest going to be published?. i am all pent up

Just no, this is Non Con at best….although I’m hesitant to actually use the word best. Beyond fucked up. You really need a LOT more Tags for this trafficking story.

What I managed to read, 1 star. Definitely not for me.

Tess (uk)

Grammar and spelling and punctuation are very good. I do find the third person narration to be less than ideal. Yes, belongs in noncon. Her "date" should be equally abused, as he is clearly worthless or worth less than worthless.