All Comments on 'The CEO's Pet Ch. 03'

I’m not going to repeat my comments from the first two chapters except for one. All the silly mistakes. You do have me wondering whether English is your first language because of some of them but one error that’s got nothing to do with grammar is when you fail to complete a sentence. At one one point a character says “Before we do that we should. That’s the end of it. Should do what? That should have been picked up on the final read through if not before. I do wonder if you do any checking before you submit.