All Comments on 'The Challenge Ch. 03: Punishment'

I’m relieved that you noted at the start of each chapter that the story was about a CNC encounter. If that hadn’t been present it would have made him look like an abusive arsehole.

I can appreciate the concept of a primal hunt and how it must feel but it’s not something I’m physically capable of anymore, I have wandered naked through the countryside for those who haven’t I can tell you you’re missing out. It’s an incredibly freeing sensation. These days though I can’t cope with the cold, I’m aching all over and not in a good way just thinking about it.

I really did enjoy your story but I know I would have hated it initially without that foreword.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (UK)

Loved all three chapters...this one was the best of the three. I tried to give it 5 stars but for some reason, it glitched and it looks like I voted 1 star. That was not my intention. Please keep writing. I am going to show all 3 chapters to my hubby/Master and tell him that I want something like this for Christmas 😊😊